good song its one i've find myself coming back to quite a few times now
its got a really nice pop punk feel to it
id like to hear an electric version of this but a part of me feels like it would take away the integrity of the song because it has a lot of character as an acoustic piece and you have quite a soft spoken voice and i think that contributes to the general acoustic niceness too
is that a second guitar i hear at about one minute in?
if this is recorded on a multitrack i'd put some compression on that and maybe turn the high end of the eq up because it kind of gets lost in the bass end of your rhythm guitar
i like the kind of half talking line at about three minutes inits very Jarvis cocker and thats hard to pull of without sounding like a dick and you've done it so well done haha